Contoh Dialog meninggalkan Pesan Bahasa Inggris

Ini tugas  bahasa Inggris ku,aku di suruh buat dialog di telepon jika meninggalkan pesan dan membuatkan memo. Ya hasilnya seperti ini:
SENO, PLEASE COME HERE!
Aran: Hello
Seno's Mom: Hello, who's calling?
Aran: It's me Aran. May I speak with Seno, please?
Seno's Mom: Ah, Seno is going somewhere with his friends right now. can I take your message? Or are you going to call him back?
Aran:Yes, can you tell him that Aran called? And ,please ask him to call me back.
Seno's Mom: Ok,then. i will tell Seno that Aran called and ask him to call you back. Right?
Aran:Yes that's right. Thank you so much, Mam.
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Seno: Hey Aran, that is Seno calling
Aran:Oh Seno
Seno;What can I do for you?
Aran:I need the file from the study tour that you were working on Oktober 18th, 19th, 20th, and 21th
Seno: Would you mind repeat the date?
Aran: Oktober 18th, 19th, 20th, and 21th. Can you send me those as soon as possible?
Seno:Ok, I will give it to you today.
Aran; Ok, I will wait you in my home.

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